regarding some deleted poem...	22-Sep-02/6:07 PM
Might lend itself to rhyme with a little rework. Shades of an affair? Great content though,the rose,rose,rose thing kicks a--!
Re: O' Girl! by kawakurdi	22-Sep-02/6:13 PM
Positive messages love'em!!!The comparison is very noble. Trim and simplify a little, it'll smoke!
Re: For James Thomson(1834-1882):an Epitaph by vulcan	22-Sep-02/6:15 PM
Go on wit yo bad self!! I don't know this writer but now I want to.
Re: Martyr by kawakurdi	22-Sep-02/6:24 PM
Painful,cyclical. Difficult (for me). Pain, deep pain.
Re: The Class of 2012 by jess33	22-Sep-02/6:27 PM
Simple, truthful. Rework for a little fluidity maybe? Agreeable!
Re: the silent storm by mallory180	22-Sep-02/6:32 PM
Distributors go round, 'till they get stuck. Don't ask 'cause I don't know. Less is more here I think. I felt it though. (Hoping to find???????)
Re: america's promise by dylansong	22-Sep-02/6:38 PM
When I find a solution I'll let you know. I tire of tragedy though. Ironically, I cant help you.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Sep-02/6:44 PM
A hooker? EX girlfriend? New therapist? WHAT?!!! Maybe I missed the whole thing. Needs little, of what I cannot find.