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the silent storm (Free verse) by mallory180
The wind, so cold and sharp
Like a thousand needles clinging to my skin
Dark shadows covered the houses and trees
Only a few more I said to myself
I continued to walk, but the coldness, so harsh, tempting me to turn
away and run
An eerie feeling swept across my body
I felt frozen, locked up and never to be free
But I kept on moving
The more I walked, the darker it got
Finally after hours of walking in the silent storm
I was there
I stood back and looked, this was my old house
The one I grew up in
Suddenly I began to feel a warm feeling in my chest
My heart I thought, but then I remembered the all horror that took place
here
The pain and the sorrow, the never-ending nightmare
And I realized that I can???t be here, I mustn???t live in the past
To live in the past is to go back to the dungeon from which I had just
barely escaped
So I turned and walked away, not looking back once, but facing the
silent storm
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5555553
Weighted score: 5.2777777
Overall Rank: 3782
Posted: September 22, 2002 2:20 PM PDT; Last modified: September 22, 2002 2:20 PM PDT
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