| Re: Francis' Self-portrait by New Life Drug |
9-Oct-02/6:44 PM |
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i really liked this even though it was of a graphic nature
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| Re: a comment on myself by decadentlaurel |
26-Sep-02/11:33 PM |
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someone in grade 6 (YES EVEN FROM THE UNITED STATES. THAT NATION WHERE THE PRESIDENT IS RETARDED "PRIME MINISTER POUTINE OF CANADA WANTS TO MAKE AN IGLOO FOR US?") can punctuate and capitalize. the meaning of the poem is what is important if you dont care to read beyond that then suite yourself go read jack and jill (or whatever that kiddie book is called)
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| Re: a comment on myself by decadentlaurel |
26-Sep-02/11:31 PM |
i dont like capitalization
punctuation. ok. whatever. i dont really care too much
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| Re: a comment on myself by decadentlaurel |
24-Sep-02/8:18 PM |
im retarded though. so hey. its just personal poems. they dont really make sense to other people i guess? i dont really get my thoughts out the way i want.
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| Re: a comment on myself by decadentlaurel |
24-Sep-02/8:17 PM |
for me its many things
soceity friendship fear
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| Re: a comment on myself by decadentlaurel |
24-Sep-02/8:17 PM |
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| Re: a comment on first words by decadentlaurel |
21-Sep-02/11:32 AM |
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| Re: a comment on first words by decadentlaurel |
17-Sep-02/11:25 PM |
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| Re: a comment on dps by decadentlaurel |
16-Sep-02/11:53 PM |
ok.. hrmm. i think it went something like
yeah i changed this one and wanted to leave it alone because i didn't want to lose the original.
will i look again
will our eyes meet
will my heart flutter
never...
never...
never...
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| Re: a comment on dps by decadentlaurel |
16-Sep-02/11:51 PM |
HAHAHAH yeah i screwed up..?
sorry.
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| Re: a comment on first words by decadentlaurel |
16-Sep-02/11:50 PM |
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| Re: a comment on dps by decadentlaurel |
16-Sep-02/7:30 PM |
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dead poets soceity. i couldn't think of a name. nameless? whatever. dps is good (movie maybe not name though).
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| Re: numbskull boomarang by skaskowski |
15-Sep-02/9:10 PM |
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funny i dont know if it has any real significance? is it an allusion to gambling?
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| Re: Leaf on the wind by troll454 |
15-Sep-02/8:46 PM |
A leaf crossed his path and was carried on the wind,
would sound better as
A leaf crossed his path, carried on the wind
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