on Francis' Self-portrait by New Life Drug
9 Oct 2002, 6:44 PM
i really liked this even though it was of a graphic nature
replying on myself by decadentlaurel
26 Sep 2002, 11:33 PM
someone in grade 6 (YES EVEN FROM THE UNITED STATES. THAT NATION WHERE THE PRESIDENT IS RETARDED "PRIME MINISTER POUTINE OF CANADA WANTS TO MAKE AN IGLOO FOR US?") can punctuate and capitalize. the meaning of the poem is what is important if you dont care to read beyond that then suite yourself go read jack and jill (or whatever that kiddie book is called)
replying on myself by decadentlaurel
26 Sep 2002, 11:31 PM
i dont like capitalization
punctuation. ok. whatever. i dont really care too much
punctuation. ok. whatever. i dont really care too much
replying on myself by decadentlaurel
24 Sep 2002, 8:18 PM
im retarded though. so hey. its just personal poems. they dont really make sense to other people i guess? i dont really get my thoughts out the way i want.
replying on myself by decadentlaurel
24 Sep 2002, 8:17 PM
for me its many things
soceity friendship fear
soceity friendship fear
replying on myself by decadentlaurel
24 Sep 2002, 8:17 PM
fill it in yourself.
replying on first words by decadentlaurel
21 Sep 2002, 11:32 AM
yesyeysesyse. i suck.
replying on first words by decadentlaurel
17 Sep 2002, 11:25 PM
an enfants first word
replying on dps by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 11:53 PM
ok.. hrmm. i think it went something like
yeah i changed this one and wanted to leave it alone because i didn't want to lose the original.
will i look again
will our eyes meet
will my heart flutter
never...
never...
never...
yeah i changed this one and wanted to leave it alone because i didn't want to lose the original.
will i look again
will our eyes meet
will my heart flutter
never...
never...
never...
replying on dps by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 11:51 PM
HAHAHAH yeah i screwed up..?
sorry.
sorry.
replying on first words by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 11:50 PM
i no understand?
replying on dps by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 7:30 PM
dead poets soceity. i couldn't think of a name. nameless? whatever. dps is good (movie maybe not name though).
on numbskull boomarang by skaskowski
15 Sep 2002, 9:10 PM
funny i dont know if it has any real significance? is it an allusion to gambling?
on Leaf on the wind by troll454
15 Sep 2002, 8:46 PM
A leaf crossed his path and was carried on the wind,
would sound better as
A leaf crossed his path, carried on the wind
would sound better as
A leaf crossed his path, carried on the wind