on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 8:22 PM
i can see you love bald people. everyone is bald eventually. you love everyone. good for you.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 8:05 PM
you should write a story instead of poems.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 12:09 AM
i really dont understand this. man i am dumb. whats the reference to "styx through erebos on a spoon" mean
on Leaf on the wind by troll454
15 Sep 2002, 8:46 PM
A leaf crossed his path and was carried on the wind,
would sound better as
A leaf crossed his path, carried on the wind
would sound better as
A leaf crossed his path, carried on the wind
on numbskull boomarang by skaskowski
15 Sep 2002, 9:10 PM
funny i dont know if it has any real significance? is it an allusion to gambling?
on Francis' Self-portrait by New Life Drug
9 Oct 2002, 6:44 PM
i really liked this even though it was of a graphic nature
bay and days dont rhyme.