| Re: a comment on Seasonal Lover by amateurR |
19-Sep-02/2:14 PM |
what i was trying to say is nature changes her seasons every 3-4 months and is unfaithful in that sense that she doesn't stick to one, but what you're saying makes perfect sense. I will look into revising it, thanx for the constructive advice. Please look at my other poems and tell me what you think, I'd appreciate it.
Thank you once again.
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| Re: Question by unknown |
17-Sep-02/10:01 PM |
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good poem. very interesting.
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| Re: I Miss You by savannah |
17-Sep-02/9:11 PM |
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'far or soon'? that doesn't seem right
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| Re: a comment on My Mamma's Hands by amateurR |
13-Sep-02/11:45 PM |
thanx for the comments and constructive advice..i appreciate it and i see what ur saying on reading it again...
yes..it is right..death was the picture i was trying to paint..my mom passed away 4 years ago. thanx once again.
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| Re: Mother! by kawakurdi |
13-Sep-02/12:46 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Life : Paradox by amateurR |
13-Sep-02/12:45 PM |
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