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I Miss You (Lyric) by savannah
To see you, when I wake up is a gift, A gift from up above. I didn't think it could be real. To know that you feel the same as I do, Its like a dream come true. You do something to me that I can't explain When I see you I get this queezy feeling in me. And now that you are gone I miss it. . So would I be out of line if I said, I miss you.(?) I see your picture, And want to cry. I smell your skin on the empty pillow next to mine. I hold it tight and close my eyes and pretend its you next to me. You have only been gone for so little, but already I'm wastin away. I know I'll see you again whether far or soon. In my heart is where you will stay for now. But I need you to know that I care and I miss you.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2352943
Weighted score: 4.3264494
Overall Rank: 13111
Posted: September 17, 2002 6:03 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 6:03 PM PDT
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[3] amateurR @ 155.48.131.137 | 17-Sep-02/9:11 PM | Reply
'far or soon'? that doesn't seem right
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