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Sands of hell scorch my feet and I tread quickly to the redeeming waters. Carefully spreading a towel I first kneel then sit, faceless to the ocean and confess my soul. The waves talk back at me; A sound response from God. Shedding my clothes like my sins I step through the damp to test the waters, running knees-high then diving under the first churning wave, cleansed and refreshed. Paddling out past the breakers I get knocked back but between sets there is calm. I reach my destination and there I wait beyond the white-wash. Ever searching and waiting and readying for whatever is out there, riding the high and low of each swell till my own comes for me to carry me to shore.

Up the ladder: Soldier
Down the ladder: I Miss You

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2352943
Weighted score: 4.3264494
Overall Rank: 13110
Posted: May 10, 2002 4:15 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 4:15 PM PDT
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