on Bugs by INTRANSIT
22 Apr 2007, 11:18 AM
i don't think you need "jealous". great otherwise.
on Puppet & Conversation by Blindpoetry
26 Apr 2007, 6:51 AM
well this was fun. i was worried at first because your first stanza is rather patronizing and doesn't say much i didn't know already, but the second stanza really got it going... from then on you gave us bright, fresh and disturbing images, me liked...
on new clothes, same old story by nypoet22
28 Apr 2007, 2:18 PM
'fraid you inspired me to write a poem on the emperor, thanks!
on Bleeding in the American South by wilco
14 Sep 2007, 3:10 PM
you have a well crafted western. doesn't really say anything new and i don't like the refrain, but still well done
on some deleted poem
14 Sep 2007, 3:23 PM
neatly done, thumbs up