poemranker ::20 most recent comments by thetrev and replies

Comments bythetrev, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Bleeding in the American South by wilco 14 Sep 2007, 3:10 PM
you have a well crafted western. doesn't really say anything new and i don't like the refrain, but still well done
replying on Breath by thetrev 29 Apr 2007, 1:54 AM
that's a rather unhelpful comment. how exactly am i trying too hard, pray tell?
on new clothes, same old story by nypoet22 28 Apr 2007, 2:18 PM
'fraid you inspired me to write a poem on the emperor, thanks!
on Puppet & Conversation by Blindpoetry 26 Apr 2007, 6:51 AM
well this was fun. i was worried at first because your first stanza is rather patronizing and doesn't say much i didn't know already, but the second stanza really got it going... from then on you gave us bright, fresh and disturbing images, me liked...
on Bugs by INTRANSIT 22 Apr 2007, 11:18 AM
i don't think you need "jealous". great otherwise.