on Getting Burned by sliver
15 Jul 2009, 3:30 PM
I like the idea. No expert here but with some tweaking it could flow better
on quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog
14 Jul 2009, 5:18 AM
I like it. NOt sure about last two lines. I struggle with them too.
on How to sleep sitting up by Bachus
14 Jul 2009, 5:16 AM
Brilliant, loved it!
on forever it was you by the indign
15 Jul 2006, 2:39 AM
An obvious poem but It doesnt mean I didnt enjoy it. nice