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Re: The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom 18-Mar-06/8:36 PM
I would have given this a 4, but after reading 9/11, I would give it an 11. Exquisite literature.
Re: The Ocean by Fayt 18-Mar-06/7:57 PM
The only problem I have with it is it is an incomplete sentence, "bringing" being in the present tense form. You might try:
Gentle ocean waves,
Always moving with the wind
Breathe a life to all
But I'm not trying to write it for you. In fact, I don't really like what I wrote either X(
Re: Louwanda by Jeremi B. Handrinos 18-Mar-06/7:43 PM
I like it
Re: Depression by terbenaw 26-Feb-06/1:08 AM
very well done 9/10


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