replying on Melancholy Tale by aperfecttool77
27 Jan 2003, 9:10 PM
your kindness knows no bounds. thanks for the constructive criticism though.
replying on Everything & Nothing by aperfecttool77
30 Nov 2002, 10:32 PM
Gracias. I was cautious about posting it, but now I'm kinda glad I did :)
on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom
22 Oct 2002, 9:54 PM
354?
on The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar
22 Oct 2002, 9:53 PM
4 in the last line...
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
22 Oct 2002, 9:49 PM
i like the penultimate stanza!
on Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer
23 Sep 2002, 9:54 PM
I like it but the penultimate paragraph kind of confuses me at the end.
on Bitter as Wormwood by vulcan
23 Sep 2002, 9:39 PM
Great work!
on The flower game by shwenatjadeflower
22 Sep 2002, 9:15 PM
very good!