Re: a comment on Melancholy Tale by aperfecttool77	27-Jan-03/9:10 PM
your kindness knows no bounds. thanks for the constructive criticism though.
Re: a comment on Everything & Nothing by aperfecttool77	30-Nov-02/10:32 PM
Gracias. I was cautious about posting it, but now I'm kinda glad I did :)
Re: The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom	22-Oct-02/9:54 PM
354?
Re: The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar	22-Oct-02/9:53 PM
4 in the last line...
Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	22-Oct-02/9:49 PM
i like the penultimate stanza!
Re: Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer	23-Sep-02/9:54 PM
I like it but the penultimate paragraph kind of confuses me at the end.
Re: Bitter as Wormwood by vulcan	23-Sep-02/9:39 PM
Great work!
Re: The flower game by shwenatjadeflower	22-Sep-02/9:15 PM
very good!