on rock me to sleep tonight: by Sapphire
13 May 2002, 12:14 AM
Sapphire good poetry isn't only composed of words that sound good. It also has a little thing called meaning.
on S by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 May 2002, 1:22 PM
This is fucking genius! References to math, intellectualism, athletics, competition, struggle with implicit emotion, agression, and blow jobs (fucking face) all rolled into a simple Haiku! I bow in your wake.
on Ice Cream Truck by swift_enterprises
12 May 2002, 11:03 AM
Whoever gave this a 9 is a poetic invalid.
on Tom and Jerry by WarrenGDawg
11 May 2002, 11:11 PM
After returning from the Ann Arbor art museum I'd thought I'd seen some of the best my community had to offer - until I saw this. WarrenGDawg, you are the most gifted and eloquent, most subtle but effective, most adroit and multi-platformed author I've seen since Poe. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing what you produce in the future.
Not bad but not good. Ask yourself where you're going when you write. I understand your metaphysical inquiry into security and the savage, but it would make more sense if you framed the poem within a broader context - perhaps the human psyche. Make it anagogical. Tell me something.