Re: Remembrance by Caducus	11-Nov-04/5:31 AM
absolutely divine, for every time we remember, they die again. As one who lost his brother in nam, I truly appreciate this...thank you
Re: a comment on Ebony shadow by Twiggy77	10-Nov-04/11:32 AM
actually as a child in school, I said very little, and yeah I did wear the dunce cap a few times, and kicked little snotty ass boys like you up and down the football field for an outlet, then found out that writing was better. As for your hatred towards the islamic faith, how christian of you, my next door neighbor is a muslim and probably the nicest family I've ever met, happy hating
Re: a comment on Ebony shadow by Twiggy77	10-Nov-04/9:56 AM
too easy, when you are born, you know nothing, therefore it's learned....I see you have also learned good people skills, your parents must truly be proud
Re: Ebony shadow by Twiggy77	10-Nov-04/8:34 AM
sentenced, but other than that, twas good, especially the last stanza, only we allow the lessons of life to teach us to hate, as I'm a firm believer that hate is learned behavior.....
Re: a comment on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman	10-Nov-04/7:56 AM
your points to the literary criticisms are well taken and I totally agree, it's the other bullshit comments that are so unnecessary, and I seriously doubt many would even venture into my neighborhood, let alone try to slap me, but be my guest......so now that that's said lets get back to writing
Re: a comment on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman	10-Nov-04/5:02 AM
Thank you, you guys have so much ettiquette when addressing people that you don't even know, the monitor and distance must really be a source of comfort for bravery, hopefully you don't write like you talk....ignorant
Re: A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman	9-Nov-04/3:23 PM
The Japanese, who were the true originators of writing Haiku, considered children as the highest form of nature. Read Ho-Chu
Re: a comment on The Roses by poetryman	9-Nov-04/2:10 PM
lmao, you should ask half the women you're related to if I'm gay, too funneeeeeee. But even if I were, does the thought of such make you question your own masculinity?...my guess is, probably!
Re: a comment on The Roses by poetryman	8-Nov-04/5:59 PM
actually your criticism would be right on, but the poem truly has little to do with flowers, someone of your intelligence could surely see that, but I do appreciate your thoughts....Bob:)
Re: Damage by Caducus	8-Nov-04/4:44 PM
an awesome piece as far as learned behavior is concerned, the vicious cycles of life need to be broken by those who are mentally stronger, the story is sad, but well told, don't be a victim by creating victims....God Bless....Bob:)
Re: Remembrance by dragonfly	8-Nov-04/4:40 PM
very nice, a loved one never really leaves us for they remain close to our hearts and memories....Bob:)