on Steal my heart by baby_d
3 Oct 2004, 4:39 PM
nice theme, could use development in my oppinion.
on midnight, on a weekday by peaceseeker
3 Oct 2004, 4:44 PM
Nice. Isn't it scary, for women: to think that at the core of each man is the desire to dominate and manipulate women, and for men: to realise that beneath all the things we tell ourselves about love, respect and art, is an animal trying to become alpha male.
on A Frosty Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo
3 Oct 2004, 4:54 PM
Haiku, even when westernised and lacking seasonal references or alterating vowel-consonant pattern, remains a powerful form of poetry. It works well in this ebbing story of hope for an unlikely romance.
on I have no problem with short people of color or religion by horus8
3 Oct 2004, 5:07 PM
Lovely. If this is a stram of consciousness, you must have a mind full of interesting information. Thank you for writing this interesting piece.