on Ode to the bun (Day 11) by jdc
15 Jul 2004, 10:22 PM
*sob* beautiful *sniff* just beautiful.
on You are my very Heart by donmiguel1960
15 Jul 2004, 10:20 PM
i like that the last line is out of meter and out of rhyme, however the ametered fourth line feels somewhat awkward; thematically, no comment, a classic ode
on wine and water by killingjuliet
6 Jun 2004, 5:10 PM
bittersweet; the language is simple but warming