Re: Ode to the bun (Day 11) by jdc	15-Jul-04/10:22 PM
*sob* beautiful *sniff* just beautiful.
Re: You are my very Heart by donmiguel1960	15-Jul-04/10:20 PM
i like that the last line is out of meter and out of rhyme, however the ametered fourth line feels somewhat awkward; thematically, no comment, a classic ode
Re: wine and water by killingjuliet	6-Jun-04/5:10 PM
bittersweet; the language is simple but warming