| Re: PATIENCE by jroday |
17-May-04/6:58 AM |
I wrote this poem based on my life after becoming
epileptic.to all the readers of this poem, please read
it close i'm sure your have some interesting comments
for me. Thank You JRODAY
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| Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer |
10-Aug-04/5:06 AM |
What is the concept behind this poem? before i make any
comment.
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| Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer |
11-Aug-04/6:26 AM |
I'm a blackman that bullshit comment you wrote dont mean a damn thing for what i ask you. I did'nt mean a
thing for asking what is the concept of your lyric? and
you want to stereotype me. you need to stop taking some
of your work so personally. I like the damn lyric. born,raised. great great grandfather hung in mississippi during those times. and people dont like to talk about it.you say a blackman is singing it.his
ass wont be from mississippi.but anyway S.D.you just jump all over me like i wanted to hang you like some nigger on a mississippi tree.get your shit together you help me alot when i join poemranker on my writing. those three zero's you got did'nt come from me.i live in florida. they might have come from mississippi.i bless you with a 9
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| Re: Blobby song$ by MR Blobby |
11-Aug-04/6:45 AM |
SELF-RESPECT-WHERE TALENT IS A DWARF,
SELF-ESTEEM IS A GIANT
HANG IN THERE MR BLOBBY!
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| Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer |
11-Aug-04/12:17 PM |
Let me tell you something bubba, you will never know how a person will feel about anything they read. i dont give a damn what kind of comments you make or what you call a person.so wipe the milk from around your mouth,and grow the fuck up and be a man.and what i mean by that is instead of calling me a embrowned
asshat or i will be shitpie'd oneday or another. just call me a nigger and get it over with. i'd rather for a man to say what he really feels than to play teenage
games with me,see in my life time i've been called nigger,colored,afro-american,coon,boy. and now i'm black. like i told you before i like the damn lyric. but you just took shit the wrong way.you aint nothing but a niggling i know you dont know what it mean. so i'm going to tell you. it means trifling,piddling,inconsequential,measly,picayune.its
educated black people in the south with master degrees
that our forefathers fought and died for so that we could have a better future in your lyric you talk about pride. in black history we talk about how to survive. BLACK HISTORY 101 THE END
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| Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer |
11-Aug-04/3:34 PM |
HA, HA, HA, HA,SON PEOPLE GROW THROUGH EXPERIENCE IF
THEY MEET LIFE HONESTLY AND COURAGEOUSLY. THIS IS HOW CHARACTER IS BUILT.I have always learned from EXPERIENCE THAT THE GREATER PART OF OUR HAPPINESS OR MISERY DEPENDS UPON OUR DISPOSITIONS, AND NOT UPON OUR
CIRCUMSTANCES.I'AM HAVING A GOOD TIME PLAYING WITH YOU
ON THIS MATTER, BUT YOU'RE TAKING IT TO SERIOUS.SO I'AM GOING TO LEAVE IT ALONG, BUT i hav'nt been a negro
since back in the 70's (smile)
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| Re: Black Love by Faulk |
15-Sep-04/2:15 PM |
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I KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL @#%$#@##$$$#@#$%^&*(#$%^&*#$%^&&% AND SOME
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| Re: THE GAME by jroday |
19-Sep-04/5:06 AM |
THIS IS NOT A POEM FOR SEXUAL INTENT.
THIS IS A POEM FOR SEXUAL INTETEST.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Sep-04/2:22 PM |
let him go he seems less than a man anyway if he can't
tell you it's over i bless you with a 10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Sep-04/2:56 PM |
remember sweetheart! life may deal us many defeats
confront defeat go over it all the way through it and go on. you only live once, but if you work it right,
once is enough. love ya!
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23-Sep-04/3:07 PM |
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| Re: No One But You by TLRufener |
6-Oct-04/2:55 AM |
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| Re: Black Woman by jroday |
6-Oct-04/10:42 AM |
D.A. I know how you feel. but sometimes it's better to
be friends friendships or almost like relationships
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