Re: a comment on Equestrian Dreams by Kamikaze	Kamikaze 75.8.123.48	30-Jul-08/3:51 PM
This is an old one, actually. Only one of a few without the rhyme scheme. The Dora one is much more recent, and you'll note the greater sopistication of rhyme than say, the Barney one. (But if you don't like Purple Reign, you probably won't like any of my others, so...)
Re: a comment on Blood Plush by Kamikaze	Kamikaze 75.8.123.48	30-Jul-08/3:48 PM
I understand pimples to be lovelorn, mopey, angst ridden poems about relationships of youth. Right? This is more my own brand of twisted kiddie rhyme or nursery rhyme. While 90% of them have simple rhyme patterns, I'll try the advice of loosening up the pattern with a couple of new ones upcoming. If you read all my poems, you'd also see that converging storylines evolve, but I only post the ones that can stand alone here. Go read Equestrian Dreams if you want to see what happens when I strip out the rhymes and go free verse. Even with similar subject material, the effect is not the same.
Re: a comment on Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	Y2kSlamPoet 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/9:41 AM
Oh and thank you for the tens... though since they come from you and your twin, their value is quite empty. But non-the-less it ups my over-all average!
Re: a comment on Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	Y2kSlamPoet 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/9:37 AM
Er, actually no, it correctly described me at that point in time. I'm happy to say that that is no longer the case. Thats right! I'm no longer homeless and I am, yes, surprisingly enough, employed. Also though not exactly completely comfortable financially, I am no longer straight broke. Sorry to have burst your happy little bubble there TJ. Toodles you queer dolt!
Re: Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	T. Jonathron Remp 76.210.104.80	30-Jul-08/9:21 AM
Finally, a poem that describes you correctly.
Re: a comment on Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	Y2kSlamPoet 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/9:02 AM
Well your homosexuality and disturbing yearning for my butt-hole has indeed been quite openly expressed. I'm sure now that you really wish you had sodomized me in this fantasy park of yours. All that aside, you, you silly lil faggot, have NOT won, I am sorry (No, joyous) to say. Unless coming out of the closet and expressing your burning desire to be gay love partners with me was your aim, which then in that case, yes Oh scary queer boy, you have horridly succeeded. Oh, and thanks for providing me with potent ammunition, it makes my job alot easier. Toodles you silly faggot!
Re: a comment on Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	Y2kSlamPoet 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/8:59 AM
Well your homosexuality and disturbing yearning for my butt-hole has indeed been quite openly expressed. I'm sure now that you really wish you had sodomized me in this fantasy park of yours. All that aside, you, you silly lil faggot, have NOT won, I am sorry (No, joyous) to say. Unless coming out of the closet and expressing your burning desire to be gay love partners with me was your aim, which then in that case, yes Oh scary queer boy, you have horridly succeeded. Oh, and thanks for providing me with potent ammunition, it makes my job alot easier. Toodles you silly faggot!
Re: Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	Tyler J. Mancini 208.32.117.78	30-Jul-08/8:46 AM
It truly is unfortunate that you found this... It brings back memories of performing late night sodomy in the park... Truly a wonderful time... WIN.
Re: Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	Tyler J. Mancini 208.32.117.78	30-Jul-08/8:46 AM
It truly is unfortunate that you found this... It brings back memories of performing late night sodomy in the park... Truly a wonderful time... WIN.
Re: a comment on Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini	Y2kSlamPoet 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/8:08 AM
Wow, your skill at being opportunistic only reinforces the fact that you're horridly unoriginal and possess the character qualities of a tantalized vulture. But, on the brighter side, you got a minor vote score adjustment that says you barely made par. Toodles dipshit!
Re: a comment on Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini	Tyler J. Mancini 208.32.117.78	30-Jul-08/7:54 AM
Your counting skills are akin to that of a brain dead 4th grader... Nice job!
Re: Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet	Y2kSlamPoet 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/7:45 AM
You know, I don't even fucking remember writing this shit... or anything else that happened that night. Well I guess that explains why I never did heroin again after that first time... fucking Portland that shithole.
Re: a comment on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/7:11 AM
You know, it'd be nice if you, like, you know, commented and/or voted on some of my recent postings. I don't care even if it's a zero and a message that says "You suck donkey dick.". That atleast would beat the feeling that my almighty crap is not even being read.... FUCK DOOD, I'M NOT EVEN SURE OR HAVE A MERE INCLING IF IT IS INDEED CRAP, THERE ISN'T ANY OBJECTIVE OPINIONS ON THE MATTER!!! Cmon, throw me something that confirms that I'm alive or atleast I'm an acknowledged zombie.
Re: Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini	Don-Quixote 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/7:03 AM
So anyway TJTwin, heres your seven. Oh, and your shutup list had the opposite effect... and it wasn't even funny.
Re: a comment on Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini	SupremeDreamer 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/6:52 AM
-squints again- Ah fuck. I hate these moments... Oh well, atleast we know the drugs are good and they are definetly working.
Re: Equestrian Dreams by Kamikaze	SupremeDreamer 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/6:46 AM
Cmon dood, Mr Ed wasn't equal to beef products, why did you have to devour him and curse yourself with Horse Madness? Thank god you got off the aba rhyme addiction. Nine.
Re: a comment on Blood Plush by Kamikaze	SupremeDreamer 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/6:39 AM
The other two embodied my hatred for those kid shows. And I genuinely considered them funny, like I enjoyed reading every word. I wasn't saying you never did write in those forms. As for the preference for villanelles? It enables one to come up with clever revolutions to the lines in rotating rhyme, it's preset at a good length, and it allows a poet to get away with pimple rhymes if he executes it well enough-- which is what you seem to be preoccupied with.
Re: A List of Names That Should SHUT UP by Tyler J. Mancini	SupremeDreamer 76.254.27.93	30-Jul-08/6:31 AM
... Man this reeks of unoriginality. How can I even be moved to parody your pieces? As an enemy, you are no where near formidable.
Re: Disregard the first line of this poem by T. Jonathron Remp	Kamikaze 75.20.182.21	29-Jul-08/11:58 PM
Very clever! I breath of fresh air around here.
Re: a comment on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer	nentwined 98.148.139.252	29-Jul-08/11:58 PM
Just a note--I'm actually getting all of his "comments via email" as bounces. But they're fun, so don't mind me.