Re: a comment on ~Methinks~ by wDaphnew	wDaphnew 85.210.12.240	23-Aug-12/1:15 PM
Fuck off, you illiterate cunt.
Re: A hangman's moaning by Moauram	Dovina 208.127.227.170	27-Jul-12/9:17 PM
I see your mind, his look at me when I fired him. Yes, it's not the same as your hanging him, but I see your mind. Good. Rest in peace.
Re: The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	Moauram 180.215.47.82	27-Jul-12/8:26 PM
Soulful poem...
Re: a comment on The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	nypoet22 69.118.234.247	26-Jun-12/9:13 AM
but it wasn't complete! we left off at verse 23 (summer/winter). on this poem i agree with your comments; made two changes where you suggested, though i still prefer simile over metaphor for the end of the first stanza.
Re: The Owl in the Wasteland by Caducus	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/4:35 PM
I haven't a clue what's going on here.
Re: a comment on The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/4:21 PM
Good God, yes - I'd forgotten about that! It's too late to go rooting round a broken computer tonight, but I wrote a renga once upon a time after that. Maybe I'll post it one day. (Actually, having read our effort, it wasn't at all bad!)
Re: a comment on The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	nypoet22 69.118.234.247	22-Jun-12/4:14 PM
great to hear from you again! y'know, we never did finish that renga!
Re: Facebook Post by Skamper	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/4:14 PM
For the lulz -10-
Re: The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/4:11 PM
Mostly ace. May I suggest some crits? I'm going to anyway. Line 4 trips the rhythm too much - perhaps needs revising? Line 8 - get rid of 'like'. It's unnecessary and interrupts the flow. As someone's already said, 'valo(u)r' and 'greater' just don't do it. The other rhymes are perfect (flesh/creche? Fantastic!) so don't spoil it right at the end. Otherwise, like -8-
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/4:06 PM
Marvellous.
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	nentwined 24.7.113.224	22-Jun-12/4:02 PM
Rockmage's—you can "search inside". Pictures of his art too, and I did a small handful of illustrations. :)
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/4:01 PM
Truthfully, this has made my day. There's no synopsis or review - what's in the book? Your poemes?
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	nentwined 24.7.113.224	22-Jun-12/3:58 PM
Yup :)
Re: Max's Poems by nentwined	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/3:57 PM
Is that rockmage on the cover?
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/3:51 PM
This is one of those beautiful dystopian images. You know, where Time Team 3000 finally prises open the blast doors to see the server, bathed in an eerie glow, still humming away.
Re: Counting by Dovina	nentwined 24.7.113.224	22-Jun-12/3:49 PM
I think "grave" is out of place (even though I'm sure you intended that, I think it's the wrong out of place, at that point?) It's a lot of fun, a good one, but I want to trim it, slightly, find it a cadence (or a different one). Like.
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/3:48 PM
Every man has his price. And if all else fails, just train a bear or something.
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	nentwined 24.7.113.224	22-Jun-12/3:46 PM
I wonder if cafe press offers those....
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	Ranger 2.97.62.69	22-Jun-12/3:46 PM
Either that or a five-foot patent leather spanking stick emblazoned with the words "EVEN IN THE DEATHLY GRIP OF MY ANGST I WILL BE SOCIABLE". Too much to ask?
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	nentwined 24.7.113.224	22-Jun-12/3:43 PM
The lights go out But the server runs Alone, its cycles Over-clocked The packets never come.