Beyond_Dreams
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
31 Jan 2005, 12:44 PM
Thank You
I disagree. It does work on an emotional level.
What do you mean?
I daresay your dangerous forays into poetry are every bit as mangled as those first few timid weavlings. A woman incapable of wrapping her head round the Three Principles of Embroidery cannot even begin to appreciate the Five Pillars of Poetry. Perhaps that's why none of your poemes even rhyme :(
Very timely. The war is lost, yes, sadly.
He means he's jealous and lonesome, like a desert rat. He wants you to humor him with objections. Really, though this is not bad, pretty nice really.
My grandmother tried to teach me embroidery, but she discovered that I could not learn its intricacies, otherwise you might not be subjected to the lesser skill of my poetry.
What the hell are you talking about?
This poem does not work on an emotional level.
I think what Dovina is trying to tell us is that women have to be stupider than men to survive in the slow-paced world of embroidery and cleaning. Can you imagine what the world would come to if such menial tasks fell to the men? Men, who are used to living life on the edge, used to making split second decisions under enormous pressure, used to pushing the human body to its physical limits, and beyond? By God sir, we'd all be killed! I'll never forget the day my grandfather offered to help Mrs Bloomsbury with her embroidery, and lost a leg through boredom.
not related to my poem ?!
But it has nothing to do with intelligence. Chimps can survive nudely because they are very hairy.
you still don't get it. It has nothing to do with averages. The yeast is simpoly better at surviving in its environment than other kinds of living creatrues are in its environment.
"This is the weakest response ever written.
PS-stop quoting my comments back to me, escpecially without rearranging the internal quotation marks. That's simply rude. And besides, it's totally pointless and I'll just end up inserting a bunch of "I, Shuushin, am a chafed anus"-type statements for you to parrot back to me. "
The first two lines are plagiary.
I suppose whatever I say, you'll just say it works on an emotional level.
This poem does not work on an emotional level.
You idiot. Most humans could not survive in a woman's uretha either, but that doesn't mean yeasts are cleverer than us. PS-your failure to understand the phrase "on average" is the feather in the meatcap you started with that whole 29th century debacle. You deserve to be cockbludgeoned.
No, wait, THIS is the weakest response ever written.
This is the weakest response ever written.
PS-stop quoting my comments back to me, escpecially without rearranging the internal quotation marks. That's simply rude. And besides, it's totally pointless and I'll just end up inserting a bunch of "I, Shuushin, am a chafed anus"-type statements for you to parrot back to me.
In all seriousness, you should read my wedding vows, which I'm having email-forwarded from America especially for you. In one part, we actually promise to love each other until we stop loving each other. They're a model for not promising more than is deliverable, and should be taught in grammar school.