EAger to Offend
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 9:55 PM
A very vivid take on feeling I've not had in some time. Thanx for reminding me!
I think you may be exactly what these pimple faced baboons need. Oh to breath the fresh scented air of a new style. (Plus I saw your picture, and DAMN.)Read a few more of mine and speak freely, please. Well done with this.
Why do all of these have 3 ten's? Are you cheating? Hoar us wrote a haiku about that. Anyway on to the poem. What to say? Quit dating insensitive assholes who can't finish for starters. Still, a well written emotional vent.
A nice piece to get lost in. And I do get lost, simple minded as I am. If you read any more of mine you'll see what I mean, just click my name. But back to this one,I think you must study Ancient Greece and the Bible, I see them both here somehow. I like it
I shall bestow a meritorious 10.
Blood and circus. Whoops make that bread and circus. Or mabe bloody bread. Civilization is dead. Feed the clown.
NOthing personal. Well said. Just don't like love poems much.
Good images. Love unreturned is still love. Love poems not my thing.
It's funny that you would use "Sliver of reality",Then talk about my purpose in life. Few and far between are we, but I am certain that will change, just like the weather, may a new season come.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 9:25 PM
:o
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 9:26 PM
Love is so over-rated. (Unless you are Italian), *Sigh*, but I'm also a scorpio so there goes that. ;)
I got I and II. III did not follow my track.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 9:29 PM
This is well written. Seems love has been unfair eh?
I admire anyone who can be enamored with life. Tis not an ailment from which I suffer.
I agree with p&k aboout the poem AND the Sens!! I feel decieved, Bill. This was written like a Leafs fan: strong for two periods but surrendering to the curse in the end.
Best of luck in this new season of hockey and poetry. I fear you may need it.
Yours Truly
A Concerned Fan
Damn I love this poem. I think I love you Christof.
Just the way I like to approach every day. Yes! Life is good.
So are you actually holding the ashes or are they in an urn, or just in the plastic box from the morgue. Really, I only think the song could be successful if Kermit the Frog were to sing and play it (capo on the 3rd) on kind bud. But that is just me.
Ha, you had me going there for a minute.
P.S. Definitely a poem!
I thought I already gave this a Ten, well here's another if so. It deserves a thousand. This discribes my dad perfectly, May he rest in peace.Thank you.