Smile. Candidly. 21.09

Took me a couple of reads. I'm slow. 24.0

YES!!! I worship the screen your poem appears on! 24.564

Kind of sappy.

Still sappy.

Excellently done. 23.56

13 views and no votes?! What are you people fucking BLIND! 10!

Satan fears nothing but my Ice scream.

Nice touchy feely. A good view of the intangible shared by two. 22.443

Good druggie!

Each separate image is strong. They jangle when placed together. Like chimes poorly tuned. Instant immolation. Casual demise. Death by change. 21.009

You were not alone. You are together?

I am left not knowing where that foot is supposed to be placed.

Cutesy song.

Are not we getting a bit defensive? OOPS! I meant you. I am never too defensive.

Have to mark this with a vote. I get confused without my place markers. Ashamed I am to give this low. (5)

Yes, but there is no difference. The goal is never reached. The dunes remain the same trickling shifting sands. 23.55

You really know how to cheer a person up! 24.66

Social Sex and The Climbing and Sinking! 21.11

If you left off the last three lines, this would be as good as the first I read in this line.