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paint me a poem (try 2) (Free verse) by nentwined
paint me a picture with countable stanzas,
colors that rhyme directly and slant,
paint me a plot that stands up for itself,
or a moment in time inherently deep;
paint me the lines that twist their own language,
the form a bit playful, but in essence quite deep;
paint me a picture that explains its own being,
then takes that same being, and twists it around.
paint me a poem that's naked when clothed,
with innocent yang and experienced yin,
make it sing loudly the chords of the soul
and paint it again, and again, and again.
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