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Different Paths (Free verse) by singinkygal I want to swim the ocean
while you're content wading in the creek
you roll your eyes with doubt
everytime I speak
of my ambition
You won't even listen about my passion, my dreams
I guess to you it just seems
so unreal
the way I feel
about life
Tied and bound by your negativity
If I don't get out it will contaminate me
I won't be discouraged
I won't stumble over your block
I'm leaving with my pride and courage
no more for you to mock
Up the ladder:
Serendipity (title suggestions wanted)
Down the ladder:
Ennui
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Posted: March 26, 2004 11:35 AM PST; Last modified: March 26, 2004 11:35 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.493059 Overall Rank: 2800 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239
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26-Mar-04/12:35 PM
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An ivory-handled bum sausage of dignity. -10-
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singinkygal @ 216.24.108.246
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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26-Mar-04/12:58 PM
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thank you very much :)
I would not try to make this rhyme. You have a provocative thing to say; it doesn't need rhyme.
""For me, it started with the little things such as "soft-porn", and before I knew it I was spending many evenings and early mornings locked in my bedroom entertaining this seedy indulgence. Pornography is such a integral part of my life that only very recently did I realize that this demon had imbedded itself into my Heart of Darkness."
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