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Different Paths (Free verse) by singinkygal

I want to swim the ocean while you're content wading in the creek you roll your eyes with doubt everytime I speak of my ambition You won't even listen about my passion, my dreams I guess to you it just seems so unreal the way I feel about life Tied and bound by your negativity If I don't get out it will contaminate me I won't be discouraged I won't stumble over your block I'm leaving with my pride and courage no more for you to mock

hypatia 26-Mar-04/7:44 PM
I would not try to make this rhyme. You have a provocative thing to say; it doesn't need rhyme.




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