Lyric № 94922
Love in Winter Storage
My love goes lurking, like a sparrow
(on tiny, nervous springs),
who takes each seed, each bead of water
as fête, well set for kings.
My love goes stealing, like a squirrel
who fidgets and then sings
of grains he hoards as they grow fatter
till catâs distemper stings.
My love goes burrowing, like worm,
who âDirt for dowry!â sings;
and yet I know the squalid mounds
to which his harem clings.
My love goes languishing, like laurel
with roots asleep in slings:
from here till May, a sullen ember,
whose mood now weaves on wings.
2 comments
Not sure sparrows lurk though.
the rest is very nice with some solid poetic language.
So, overall I like how you say it, but what you say isn't too engaging.
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