poemranker ::The Stair by talking_goldfish

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 107895

The Stair

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jul 2004 · 0 comments

yellow and blue collide i see the grass raining down upon the world the sombre clouds attack where then lies the old red jumper now pale through years of wear? where indeed the purple sock now odd it does not pair? where lies these once perfect treasures? ah indeed, the stair!

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 6.00 weighted 5.12 rank 5658 views 144 View voting details →

5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

0 comments

Nobody has said anything yet.