Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Direct Current (Sestina) by horus8
In the middle of the desert, drunk, I did pen a dot to dot chart of the most pellucid stars. The further I walked from the fire, they spread. Out in a sheer chaos florescence,  Rorschach test. Dimorphic and shedding, I gagged in delight, and vomited up my breakfast in a similar pattern. Vatic and lost, I did a coyote running an SOS pattern. No longer having anymore use for my loggy pen. Letting go of my face into vast space with delight. I got dilly and naked and made love to the cold stars Without a second thought, I anti up for the test, and rolled out my bones to get bloody and spread. There, I came into a clearing were Asian pears spread... Along with pomegranate branded with Hades' pattern How came I upon this groove and its Persephone test? Complete with a Jerry-Built Nicholas Tesla pig pen. This was no safe place for agents, politicians, or stars To succumb to direct current and spin drift off in delight. I have a compendium of dried bullshit, and I do delight in it all for no reason, but the long shot with a spread of some legs in the Dregs, or at sky bars with the stars, that wear their sunglasses at night and in a set pattern. Calling valet for their cars that passed a crash dummy's test Litmused and abused by the best that I could never pen. Simply because, they are too rich and phonemic to pen against paper with vowels and consonants that delight an audience of blind muffled sheep shaved for the test Of us against them, alternating amps arc, powering the spread Of extemporaneous brain-washings. They bend you to pattern your DNA into a clone to be grown while you imitate stars. From your favorite sitcoms, and from some heaven these stars shoot guns into minds that Charlie Brown scars & Pig pen cares about dirt that he tends in a Gratefully Dead pattern as the girls all twirl in a whirl & carry sparks of delight I wondered where I went wrong with the light that I write to spread We all have our moments to address what we consider a test. A station Identification of stars that are paid to thrill and delight Me from this pen of slop and the lovely smell that words spread A virus patterned from power grid, rolls our heads into a black out test.

Up the ladder: Week End Justification
Down the ladder: Lesson in Wickedness

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 41
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 11

Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 5.576303
Overall Rank: 2405
Posted: March 23, 2004 4:54 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2004 4:54 PM PST
View voting details
Comments:
[10] zodiac @ 152.18.33.193 | 23-Mar-04/5:18 PM | Reply
Do you have a band, or is it just you on stage? I'm genuinely curious, and can't tell from the reviews I've read. I wish I could hear your 'material' but I lack all kinds of capability on my home computer and don't have speakers or mp3/wav players on my work computer. If you send me a CD for free, though, I'll let you keep the rest of the standard fan pack, including official Jeremi B denim-jacket patch, sunvisor, and signed glossy head-shot (I mean glossy shot, not glossy... never mind.) Also, do you ever come to the East Coast, or is it just the Strip and such? Really, I'm actually interested. -10-
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.214.180 > zodiac | 23-Mar-04/5:40 PM | Reply
That depends, both, I have a band called the Werewolves, and I do solo shows. Mostly, it's always been just me and some friends in the studio, but over the years we've gotten better, and are starting to get some college play and so on.
you can e mail me at horus8j@yahoo.com and leave me your info and we'll keep you informed. I believe we are planning something for the east coast this summer, but I always say that and it falls through, so who knows. We are having a five dollar cd sale currently on both discs.

http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/horus82
[10] zodiac @ 67.240.155.93 > horus8 | 23-Mar-04/7:00 PM | Reply
How about a trade? We've got a five-song demo cd that should be finished by the end of the weekend. That works out to $1 per song of mine (or $1.25 for 4 tracks and a free dub remix), which I can promise you is a bargain.

By the way, I think The Werewolves is such a better name than Blue Collar Beat.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.214.180 > zodiac | 24-Mar-04/12:46 AM | Reply
Blue collar beat was just a stamp on a disc not a weekend pass anyway, but thanks dude, I really do appreciate it, I think your poetry is fucking great. I was amazed to find that no one owned it? (the name the werewolves)
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.214.180 > zodiac | 24-Mar-04/12:48 AM | Reply
As for the trade, okay give me your address and I'll give you back mine when I send you my two records.
295 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001