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a toast to the sky (Free verse) by tralala42001
time paces and then it comes
back- a second chance?
a second moment?- a third
touch?-NO- a fourth shot
spilt on the carpet holding a piece
of flesh and yet the corpse
is the one who enjoys the
sun,moon, and stars-eats
grass--> and the lips of the
flesh leaves scars and burns
on the rocks around the tree
with moss leaking through
feeding and eating on bark
-old and tough- round and rough-
indians believed in circles- we
believed in squares- and i
believed in you
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Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10730
Posted: March 6, 2004 11:33 AM PST; Last modified: March 6, 2004 11:33 AM PST
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