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Wisdom (Haiku) by crazyknight O, see the wisdom
Floating in the open sky
It does flow from me
Up the ladder:
Faint Heart
Down the ladder:
Just a Year
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Posted: July 27, 2006 8:23 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2006 8:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10711 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.37.18
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27-Jul-06/3:11 PM
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Really?
If you're going to write about wisdom in a Japanese format, it's virtually a legal requirement that you talk about an old man with long white hair sitting by the side of a road.
Seriously though, this doesn't actually describe wisdom, nor does it give a solid metaphor for it.
O, those space fillers
useless words for syllables. This Haiku does suck. 136 view(s)
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