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Haiku № 144833

Wisdom

by crazyknight

Member since 2005 · Posted 27 Jul 2006 · 3 comments

O, see the wisdom Floating in the open sky It does flow from me

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3 comments

[4] Dovina 27-Jul-06/3:11 PM Reply
Really?
[n/a] Ranger 28-Jul-06/12:25 AM Reply
If you're going to write about wisdom in a Japanese format, it's virtually a legal requirement that you talk about an old man with long white hair sitting by the side of a road.

Seriously though, this doesn't actually describe wisdom, nor does it give a solid metaphor for it.
[7] ALChemy 28-Jul-06/6:25 AM Reply
O, those space fillers
useless words for syllables.
This Haiku does suck.