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Wisdom (Haiku) by crazyknight

O, see the wisdom Floating in the open sky It does flow from me

Ranger 28-Jul-06/12:25 AM
If you're going to write about wisdom in a Japanese format, it's virtually a legal requirement that you talk about an old man with long white hair sitting by the side of a road.

Seriously though, this doesn't actually describe wisdom, nor does it give a solid metaphor for it.




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