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Ode № 93269

Sages

by meektiger15

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Mar 2004 · 8 comments

The war begins With the sages They want the world to end Stealing peasants souls and making wages They never have any care About the peasants, war or even their family All they do is stay in their lair They have the key But they do not use it It could save the world But they dont give a **it They got bored And killed everyone in their path They had no sympathy For all those who got in their way suffored their wrath They couldnt see They began the war And made it come to an end They just took their lore And have never been seen again

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[n/a] meektiger15 3-Mar-04/6:43 AM Reply
Okay yeah this poem sucks because I had nothing to write about and I was bored and couldn't think of anything so I just typed stuff down..hahaha yeah well anyways...... <:3 )~~~L8er~~~~( 3:>
[9] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 3-Mar-04/6:46 AM Reply
I suggest you capitalise the rhyming words - like this:

The war begins with the SAGES
They want the world to end, stealing peasants souls and making WAGES
They never have any CARE
About the peasants, war or even their family: all they do is stay in their LAIR
They have the key but they do not use IT
It could save the SHIT
They got bored and killed everyone in their PATH
They had no sympathy for all those who got in their way suffored their WRATH
They couldnt see they began the WAR
And made it come to an end; they just took their LORE
And have never been seen AGAIN
Because they are all INSANE and snort COCAINE and COMPLAIN about headaches in the BRAIN caused by a ruptured internal cerebral VEIN
[n/a] meektiger15 › wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 5-Mar-04/6:42 AM Reply
HAH..no..That end part would be a ghood Rap like song but not a sucky poem thing...lol yeah ok BLAH BLAH o.O
[8] zodiac 3-Mar-04/12:45 PM Reply
**w'ls
[n/a] meektiger15 › zodiac 5-Mar-04/6:43 AM Reply
**w'ls ..... How'ls ??? hahhaa okay uhmmm o.O you confuze me man..
[8] zodiac › meektiger15 5-Mar-04/1:34 PM Reply
No. By the way, I read 'o.O' as your two differently-sized testes with a bit of vas deferens cross-section. Am I wrong?
[n/a] meektiger15 › zodiac 9-Mar-04/6:47 AM Reply
hah no..but one eye of mine is smaller than the other...but its not that noticable..hmm..okay nehoo! this O.o means..strange and this o.O means confuzed this -_- means fed up theres tonz of other ones but i dun wanna waste my time on ya..AHEM i mean on this discussion...haha lata ^.^
[n/a] meektiger15 › meektiger15 9-Mar-04/9:27 AM Reply
and im still confuze wat is testes????? if thats balls i dont have any im a girl .... whats testes....hmmmm...o.O