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Sages (Ode) by meektiger15

The war begins With the sages They want the world to end Stealing peasants souls and making wages They never have any care About the peasants, war or even their family All they do is stay in their lair They have the key But they do not use it It could save the world But they dont give a **it They got bored And killed everyone in their path They had no sympathy For all those who got in their way suffored their wrath They couldnt see They began the war And made it come to an end They just took their lore And have never been seen again

Fraser Allonby Q.C. 3-Mar-04/6:46 AM
I suggest you capitalise the rhyming words - like this:

The war begins with the SAGES
They want the world to end, stealing peasants souls and making WAGES
They never have any CARE
About the peasants, war or even their family: all they do is stay in their LAIR
They have the key but they do not use IT
It could save the SHIT
They got bored and killed everyone in their PATH
They had no sympathy for all those who got in their way suffored their WRATH
They couldnt see they began the WAR
And made it come to an end; they just took their LORE
And have never been seen AGAIN
Because they are all INSANE and snort COCAINE and COMPLAIN about headaches in the BRAIN caused by a ruptured internal cerebral VEIN




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