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Respiration for a Lack of Dizzyness (Free verse) by fevriere
An insignificant barely-swimming almost-warning-coloured pulpy romance,
A short-breathed juice gulp,
a cold goldfish,
A cigarette
- but most intense
and perfumed like a dazzling queen
for in my lungs our mixed breath is short
yet fills my entire body
so I gamble off my balance
into a smoky lie of you
(oh how I will laugh when I can breathe rightly once more)
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5285
Posted: February 16, 2004 10:57 AM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2004 10:57 AM PST
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