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Respiration for a Lack of Dizzyness (Free verse) by fevriere
An insignificant barely-swimming almost-warning-coloured pulpy romance, A short-breathed juice gulp, a cold goldfish, A cigarette - but most intense and perfumed like a dazzling queen for in my lungs our mixed breath is short yet fills my entire body so I gamble off my balance into a smoky lie of you (oh how I will laugh when I can breathe rightly once more)

Up the ladder: Ode to Jack
Down the ladder: Cancer

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5300
Posted: February 16, 2004 10:57 AM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2004 10:57 AM PST
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[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 17-Feb-04/6:30 PM | Reply
eeenteresting...
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