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Respiration for a Lack of Dizzyness (Free verse) by fevriere

An insignificant barely-swimming almost-warning-coloured pulpy romance, A short-breathed juice gulp, a cold goldfish, A cigarette - but most intense and perfumed like a dazzling queen for in my lungs our mixed breath is short yet fills my entire body so I gamble off my balance into a smoky lie of you (oh how I will laugh when I can breathe rightly once more)

Shuushin 17-Feb-04/6:30 PM
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