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Lisa's Song (Lyric) by horus8
Lisa's song is magical
in fact it's a verve sabbatical
There are thirteen black birds
that sing through the intro
in full metal leather, pure anti-disco.
Lisa's song is blue sky lightning
full dressed sex with an ocean widening
crackling static, and waves by pairs
An overgrown yard like nobody cares
The blowing steam at an alley opening.
The chorus is a bit too long
as the werewolves howl outside
There is no bridge in Lisa's song
As we lost boys fall from sight.
Lisa's song is full of woe
But so many are, don't you know?
We grow up fast, we come down slow
And Lisa's is a crimson bow
A song I wrote in case she shows
up tonight to raise her lows.
Lisa's song is full of strings
and a long hallway with shakin' keys
It'll keep you up at night like me
crawling through your memories
Lisa's song is half brand new
a song of what we all went through.
The chorus is a bit too bright
as our tunnel ends with train
The outro is a falsetto, light...
But full of postponed pain.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.714286
Weighted score: 5.729984
Overall Rank: 1858
Posted: February 11, 2004 8:58 PM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2004 8:58 PM PST
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with train? "with a train"? I'm confused. ;/
But other than that, sound cool- when are you going to make the mp3?
Blessed with ten.