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Artificial Reality (Free verse) by PK
Sometimes you find yourself
Stuck between a ridge
Sometimes you find yourself
Hiding behind a closed bridge
You make a world
So special and sweet
You make a world
So unreal and fake
Your world becomes a fantasy
A dream that only you see
Everyone else already knows
You've slipped and are gone
This world you wish
Is just a fraud
Everyone keeps shaking you
Hoping you'll wake up
Everyone keeps pouncing you
Wishing you could see
The ridge has fallen
The bridge has open
Reality has hit
You find yourself
Alone and waiting
Just what to do next?
You close your eyes
And step across
Turn away
And say Hello.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7142856
Weighted score: 4.654218
Overall Rank: 12278
Posted: August 11, 2002 8:19 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2002 8:19 AM PDT
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