My Own World of Darkness

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

Dark thoughts fill my head So different from what I once thought before Thoughts of death fill my mind Like a thick, dark veil they cover me... Dreams of pain engulf my soul As I lay in my own world of darkness Too late to be saved I wallow in my grief In my own world of darkness.

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[6] Frass 10-Aug-02/10:10 PM Reply

I hope this isn't really you. Let your poetry express, as with the medical term; vent. I'd like to read your poetry stemming from 'what I once thought before.'