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My Own World of Darkness (Free verse) by venusdemilo Dark thoughts fill my head
So different from what I once thought before
Thoughts of death fill my mind
Like a thick, dark veil they cover me...
Dreams of pain engulf my soul
As I lay in my own world of darkness
Too late to be saved
I wallow in my grief
In my own world of darkness.
Up the ladder:
Sinful Endeavor, Thank You
Down the ladder:
Friends
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Posted: August 10, 2002 9:20 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2002 9:20 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11583 Comments:
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Frass @ 138.88.144.208
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10-Aug-02/10:10 PM
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I hope this isn't really you. Let your poetry express, as with the medical term; vent. I'd like to read your poetry stemming from 'what I once thought before.'
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