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My Own World of Darkness (Free verse) by venusdemilo

Dark thoughts fill my head So different from what I once thought before Thoughts of death fill my mind Like a thick, dark veil they cover me... Dreams of pain engulf my soul As I lay in my own world of darkness Too late to be saved I wallow in my grief In my own world of darkness.

Frass 10-Aug-02/10:10 PM
I hope this isn't really you. Let your poetry express, as with the medical term; vent. I'd like to read your poetry stemming from 'what I once thought before.'




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