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Friends (Other) by mishy_lee They come and go
so people say
but I am here
forever to stay.
I'm here to talk to
when you are down
and when you need me
I'm always around.
when I need you
you are always there
and when I am down
you show that you care.
I'm telling you this
because we are best friends
and just so you know
it will never end.
Up the ladder:
My Own World of Darkness
Down the ladder:
Knowledge of Porridge
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Posted: August 26, 2002 9:55 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 9:55 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11584 Comments:
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Sigh'ense... @ 66.214.45.238
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26-Aug-02/11:57 AM
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Fantasy concept that flows, Liked it as much as possible5/10... Da1
Very clever how in every second stanza the rhyme isn't true.
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