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Becoming Indifferent (Free verse) by hmph I want to be ridiculed by the tongues of thousands
And dine with the kings of forsaken lands
I want to drink the blood of all my enemies
And cleanse the Earth with my own hands
I want to scorch the flesh of many
And blacken the dark-winged summer
I want to flip the lightswitch off
And make myself feel number
I want to destroy God's creations
And make my feelings dull
I want to watch his empire tremble
And lynch the ones responsible
Up the ladder:
Summer Thunder
Down the ladder:
Listen
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Posted: August 7, 2002 11:53 PM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2002 11:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7235 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.106.253
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8-Aug-02/6:04 AM
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i know that feeling well. The "summer/number" is a little awkward, though. Very cool, overall.
i'm confused...wouldn't that be you?
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