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Becoming Indifferent (Free verse) by hmph

I want to be ridiculed by the tongues of thousands And dine with the kings of forsaken lands I want to drink the blood of all my enemies And cleanse the Earth with my own hands I want to scorch the flesh of many And blacken the dark-winged summer I want to flip the lightswitch off And make myself feel number I want to destroy God's creations And make my feelings dull I want to watch his empire tremble And lynch the ones responsible

razorgrin 8-Aug-02/6:04 AM
i know that feeling well. The "summer/number" is a little awkward, though. Very cool, overall.




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