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Free verse № 8694

Listen

Member since 2001 · Posted 13 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

Listen my Heart Become a stream With those water drops high in the sky falling on a mountain towards the end become the ocean become your sea Like a fleeting rhythm like a silent desire Hear with your eyes see with your ears such a fragrant touch In a sweet embrace But look and see wait, close your eyes Open your heart open your eyes Lines on my hand lines in my mind in a circle of life in a circle of time unending ends when you are mine and in the end and those eyes walk through the door walk towards the sign outwards reflections tearless crying lost in love in you forever found looking through closed eyes

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[3] <~> 13-Aug-02/9:30 PM Reply
pare this down to make it sing. be ruthless.