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My (Free verse) by alverland theme park
I can but pray that heavenâs eyes did not tear
As my motherâs ears did bleed on that day
I can but hope that societyâs perception will change
As quickly as my fatherâs heart fell on that day
I just want you to be proud of me for who I am
But who the fuck am I,
Iâm frightened I have no clue
When you touch me,
I feel the life flowing through me
I see your dreams, your hope
I can hear your suffering,
As it takes over your triumphs
Most of all, I can see you
When I look to the back of your blue eyes
To the intensity, compassion, beauty of your soul
I see something and it breaks my soul into joyous weeping
I can see my fatherâs dignity,
The principles you hold so dear
Your aura of integrity.
My motherâs strength,
Your will is invincible,
Your mind is genuine.
My brotherâs competitiveness,
Striving for success will only lead to it
His sensitivity,
Your genuine concern for people,
Your emotion turns to optimism
My sisterâs innocence,
Itâll take her to the top of the world,
And send her tumbling down.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4407
Posted: November 25, 2003 6:22 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2003 6:22 PM PST
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