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A REVISION (Free verse) by rwoodley
Embrace change in your life It is neither good nor bad Change is just a new pathway Yet to be explored It’s an opportunity to grow and learn A beautiful re-write of our life’s script Some folks close their minds to anything That is unlike their experiences. Don’t they realize the excitation They could revel in If they were more tolerant Of people, changes and purposes That may be new or altered From what has been experienced Thus far in living their life. It takes challenges, changes and wisdom To really experience life’s fullness Dare to challenge ourselves to embrace The sunrise of each new day With resolve and desire to journey far To experience the new, the unfamiliar By walking a new pathway today.


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5941
Posted: November 23, 2003 4:46 PM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2003 4:46 PM PST
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[n/a] Shit-Crumpets @ 204.31.160.219 | 23-Nov-03/4:57 PM | Reply
This isn't a poem, its therapy verse- are you a teenage counselor?
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