poemranker ::ANGel R U by EaH4life

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Free verse № 74975

ANGel R U

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Nov 2003 · Edited 13 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

You Beautifull angel who stolen my heart... those Big Brown provokative eyes that wont let me fight How they embrace my heart with a cover of flowers And leave me thinking my self as a Coward A coward that wont tell you His feelings although it kills me every second I hide the truth I coudnt picture myself anywhere that im not with you So i write you this poem as a cowards way out But as long as you know my feelings For you I could finally rest this heart thats been Calling you out And Confront your decision that ill always Respect even if it meant that ill never see you again It should be alright because ill have no more pain ..... Because you know ...... Your THat Beutiful Angel who has Stolen mY hEart...

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[6] richa 13-Nov-03/5:40 AM Reply
provocative eyes? you want to punch her?
[n/a] EaH4life › richa 13-Nov-03/7:21 PM Reply
haha .... no i love her u idiot...by provocative eyes i mean ..provocative in a sexy way ...not in a fist fight manner...
but thanx for the comment
[0] Bachus 13-Nov-03/7:55 PM Reply
Perfect.
[n/a] EaH4life › Bachus 18-Nov-03/8:21 PM Reply
thank you my good freind