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ANGel R U (Free verse) by EaH4life
You Beautifull angel who stolen my heart... those Big Brown provokative eyes that wont let me fight How they embrace my heart with a cover of flowers And leave me thinking my self as a Coward A coward that wont tell you His feelings although it kills me every second I hide the truth I coudnt picture myself anywhere that im not with you So i write you this poem as a cowards way out But as long as you know my feelings For you I could finally rest this heart thats been Calling you out And Confront your decision that ill always Respect even if it meant that ill never see you again It should be alright because ill have no more pain ..... Because you know ...... Your THat Beutiful Angel who has Stolen mY hEart...

Up the ladder: Sleepy Hollow
Down the ladder: Trying to get signed?

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11615
Posted: November 12, 2003 10:07 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2003 7:16 PM PST
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Comments:
[6] richa @ 81.178.238.224 | 13-Nov-03/5:40 AM | Reply
provocative eyes? you want to punch her?
[n/a] EaH4life @ 64.165.16.116 > richa | 13-Nov-03/7:21 PM | Reply
haha .... no i love her u idiot...by provocative eyes i mean ..provocative in a sexy way ...not in a fist fight manner...
but thanx for the comment
[0] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 | 13-Nov-03/7:55 PM | Reply
Perfect.
[n/a] EaH4life @ 64.165.16.182 > Bachus | 18-Nov-03/8:21 PM | Reply
thank you my good freind
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