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little angel (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
with outstretched hand i opened the door and saw you laying on the floor your arms were raised spread fully wide like the wings of an angel descending from on high though my eyes could not deceive the body before me, i couldn't believe was pale and dead crimson rivers ebbing instead of rays of hope or compassion you still resembled an angel, after a fashion

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11318
Posted: November 2, 2003 6:59 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2003 6:59 PM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 2-Nov-03/8:33 PM | Reply
That's exactly how the baby mouse that I fed my tarantula looked this morning
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