poemranker ::little angel by ThePariahDog

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Free verse № 73242

little angel

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

with outstretched hand i opened the door and saw you laying on the floor your arms were raised spread fully wide like the wings of an angel descending from on high though my eyes could not deceive the body before me, i couldn't believe was pale and dead crimson rivers ebbing instead of rays of hope or compassion you still resembled an angel, after a fashion

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[n/a] horus8 2-Nov-03/8:33 PM Reply
That's exactly how the baby mouse that I fed my tarantula looked this morning