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Free verse № 69369

recede into deceit

by skaskowski

Member since 2001 · Posted 9 Oct 2003 · 3 comments

she flushes and splashes my thoughts out in flashes in clashes i've sought to forget, i've been wrought on the stable, oblivious table that ruins the room, black and white, mirror yellow.

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[6] Shuushin 9-Oct-03/5:40 PM Reply
great start, last two lines: splat.

I keep thinking about a bathroom, then horseshoes - I NEED those last two lines dammit.
[n/a] skaskowski › Shuushin 9-Oct-03/9:29 PM Reply
hahahahaha i live in space.
[8] horus8 9-Oct-03/7:22 PM Reply
Fun-key.