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recede into deceit (Free verse) by skaskowski she flushes and splashes
my thoughts out in flashes
in clashes i've sought to
forget, i've been wrought
on the stable, oblivious table
that ruins the room, black and white,
mirror yellow.
Up the ladder:
>~{In the Shadow of a Crooked Ceiling}~<
Down the ladder:
Precious Thing
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Posted: October 9, 2003 1:40 PM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2003 1:40 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0715218 Overall Rank: 6561 Comments:
Fun-key.
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I keep thinking about a bathroom, then horseshoes - I NEED those last two lines dammit.