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Free verse № 135702

Social Rant

Member since 2005 · Posted 24 Dec 2005 · 2 comments

I hear a symphony of orchestrated undertones, Thinly veiled with masquerading malcontent; The plethora of shapes made by sound Escalating the calamity of human thought. Substances shift rapidly through manageable doubt Increasing harmonious hazardous by-products Imbued with mechanical perfection and hindsight, Confounding the principles of inexplicable darkness. Transcendental purpose’s with gleeful contempt Mar the terrible beauty of the condemned constructs. Loose fitting ideals with ever encroaching horror Give birth to the rise of conformity and compliance

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[9] Dovina 26-Dec-05/1:37 PM Reply
This is funny. Really.
[8] zodiac 27-Dec-05/9:23 PM Reply
This was probably good before you shift-F7'ed it into oblivion