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I'm Aboard (Free verse) by Ali_cat018
I don't hear the whistle,
but I know I'm on the train of life.
I try to keep it on the track,
but I know I'm not the conductor.
I will it to stay the course,
through times of happiness and strife.
Trains can't turn around and
revisit a station it has already passed.
Only continue on a plotted plan
and hope it did what it was supposed to.
If life's train were to have turned around for me,
it would have certainly crashed.
I know I'm on the path,
this thing called life will take me.
I can only do the best at every moment
or station that I know I can do,
Because I know in the end,
this wonderful confusing train will let me off,
right where I'm supposed to be.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9834
Posted: October 2, 2003 12:25 PM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 12:25 PM PDT
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